WHY Animal SHOULD NOT BE
abandoned
Have
you ever thought about how many animals
get abandoned every year? I have and the
number of animals that do, you will not like it!
Firstly,
animals can’t feed themselves because they have four legs and not two arms and
two legs.
Secondly,
if animals can’t take care of themselves
imagine what they will be like on the road.
Finally,
the rarest sort of animals can become extinct soon because they are
getting abandoned and hurt.
Those
are my three reasons why you should not abandon animals.
Dear Brooklyn
What we liked about
your story.... That you talked about abandoned animals as we have an
abandoned animal. We also liked how you raised some good points in your
story.The part we wish you could change was about how some animals could become
extinct due to being abandoned.When I asked you what sort of animal you
said Kiwi's. Kiwi's are not abandoned they live in the wild. But still A very
good story.
So well done Magoo
Love From Mum &
Derek
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