In
Rugby you need to do defence, forward passes,
knock on, tackle and run more. In netball all you do is pass, take one
step and shoot.
In
rugby it is a bigger paddock so you do more exercise.
In
netball you only get a whimpy graze.
In
rugby its extremely harder to get a try because you can get tackled and face
plant in mud. Hopefully if you play netball you will change sport to rugby
after reading my story.
Hi Seamus,
Wow! You made
your persuasive writing sound like rugby was really exciting to play by using
“face plant in the mud” and you put me off playing netball as there is no way I
would want a “whimpy graze”.
We thought
another way to present your story would be to organize the points into two
paragraphs so that the first paragraph talks about the rugby points and the
second paragraph talks about the netball points.
Ka mau te wehi!
Kia pai tō rā.
Awesome! Have a nice day.
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