Monday 4 November 2013

Why technology should be at school


Why technology should be at school
Today I’m going to be telling you some exciting reasons why technology should be at school. If you think technology shouldn’t be at school I bet you at the end of this epic story you will change your mind.
Technology should be at school because the school won’t need to buy anymore technology so we will be saving school money for more important things.
Some kids aren’t really responsible for their thing I know I’m not. So if we bring our technology to school it will make us more responsible for our things.
If the teacher doesn’t want us to play our technology in class the teacher can just have a box and we put our technology in the box every day before school and get them back at lunch play and at the end of the day. So I bet you have change your mind if you disagreed at the start. That’s three facts and reasons why technology should be at school.



Dear Annie
Here are my 2 stars and my wish.
My first star is we love the logic and sensible  thinking  in your story,
Second star, love the use of positive words especially the word Epic!!!!!
My one wish would be a little more detail in each point.
 
hugs and kisses Mum and Dad  XXXXXXooooooo

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