WHY
kids should have a waterslide for free
I believe that we should have a waterslide for free because
it’s an awesome way to cool of on
roasting day’s and I should know because I have an awesome of my own an tell me
it’s much better than being sprayed by a hose or having a bucket of ice cold water splashed in your
face.
From
Zane’s Mum
I
like the way you have described the water slide by calling it awesome
I
like the way you describe it being better than being splashed in the face with
ice cold water
I
wish you had put a sentence break in the story somewhere.
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