WHY ANIMAL SHOULD NOT BE ABANDONED

WHY Animal SHOULD NOT BE

abandoned

Have you ever  thought about how many animals get  abandoned every year? I have and the number of animals that do, you will not like it!

Firstly, animals can’t feed themselves because they have four legs and not two arms and two legs.

Secondly, if animals can’t take care  of themselves imagine what they will be like on the road.

Finally, the rarest sort of animals can become extinct soon because they are getting  abandoned and hurt.

Those are my three reasons why you should not abandon animals.

Dear Brooklyn

What we liked about your story.... That you talked about abandoned animals as we have an abandoned animal. We also liked how you raised some good points in your story.The part we wish you could change was about how some animals could become extinct due to being  abandoned.When I asked you what sort of animal you said Kiwi's. Kiwi's are not abandoned they live in the wild. But still A very good story.

So well done Magoo

Love From Mum & Derek

Zanes dad came and torched the eggs. Most of them died in the egg and some had grown but in the end they all died. This could have been because of the weather.
You can see in the picture below the egg is see through, this means that it was not fertile. The next picture shows an egg that had started to grow but because of the weather it died. The third picture you cannot see through the egg at all which means that there was a chicken in there.

Unfortunately the baby chick didn't make it out of the shell.  Mrs T-k took the shell off it after school and there was no room for it to move around is was too big for it's shell.

Moses