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Monday, 4 November 2013

Why technology should be at school


Why technology should be at school
Today I’m going to be telling you some exciting reasons why technology should be at school. If you think technology shouldn’t be at school I bet you at the end of this epic story you will change your mind.
Technology should be at school because the school won’t need to buy anymore technology so we will be saving school money for more important things.
Some kids aren’t really responsible for their thing I know I’m not. So if we bring our technology to school it will make us more responsible for our things.
If the teacher doesn’t want us to play our technology in class the teacher can just have a box and we put our technology in the box every day before school and get them back at lunch play and at the end of the day. So I bet you have change your mind if you disagreed at the start. That’s three facts and reasons why technology should be at school.



Dear Annie
Here are my 2 stars and my wish.
My first star is we love the logic and sensible  thinking  in your story,
Second star, love the use of positive words especially the word Epic!!!!!
My one wish would be a little more detail in each point.
 
hugs and kisses Mum and Dad  XXXXXXooooooo

Tuesday, 18 June 2013

Zanes dad came and torched the eggs. Most of them died in the egg and some had grown but in the end they all died. This could have been because of the weather.
You can see in the picture below the egg is see through, this means that it was not fertile. The next picture shows an egg that had started to grow but because of the weather it died. The third picture you cannot see through the egg at all which means that there was a chicken in there.

Unfortunately the baby chick didn't make it out of the shell.  Mrs T-k took the shell off it after school and there was no room for it to move around is was too big for it's shell.