Treasure chest

Guess what I have hidden in my treasure chest?

Let’s find out.

I would sneak some of my special stuff like a diary, a pocket knife I got from my granddad that past away before I was born.

I hopped into bed and fell straight to sleep. When I woke up I went to look for more secret stuff. I found some fur from my dog called Ruby and I kept it. Soon I went to my room and found some pictures of my granddad, my dog and a picture of my old teddy bear I could remember it. It was so fluffy.

When I went to look at the time it was 7 o’clock so I went to bed and got my treasure chest I unlocked it and put all my stuff in.

I heard someone coming I had to hide my treasure chest somewhere so I hid it under my bed and pretended to be asleep.

Then everyone went to bed but I was still awake.

I had to hide it somewhere so I would forget about the treasure chest so I woudn’t be able to find it ever again.

By Devan  

Well done Devan ,

Good imagination was used and planing from start to finish .

Double checking helps to fine tune ideas . Keep it up son !!!!!

Dad

Why rugby is more skilful then netball

Why rugby is more skilful then netball

Do you want to find out why rugby is more skilful than netball? I know rugby is more skilful than netball because in netball all you do is pass, pivot and shoot. See boring! In rugby you can kick, pass, tackle and run all you want.

See you can do much more in rugby than netball. People that play netball are so lazy.

In rugby you are doing lots of exercising. When you break your bones it shows hard work.

In netball you can’t shoot the hoop from the end of the court because they will probably miss.

In rugby you can run a full field and score a try so I believe that rugby is more skilful then netball. But I suppose the people that play rugby already know that. 

Hi Dev,

The 2 stars I have for your writing is you have used a lot of words that have convinced me that rugby might be better than netball. Second star is the use of nouns in your story. My wish is you continue to write amazing stories like this and share them with me at home.

Well done Dev

Love Mum xxx